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Following

Footprints

Following footprints in the sand Across the beach, down to the sea I picture you, hardy and tanned Always joyful, always carefree Your righteous path is hard to trace Following footprints in the sand Such soft impressions waves erase I wish you could lead, take my hand When you were with me, life seemed grand I wasted not one bit of time Following footprints in the sand For with you, any hill I’d climb We’ll meet again; I’ll join you soon Our long-lost friends will be on hand To launch our cosmic honeymoon Following footprints in the sand January 19, 2020

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 7/12/2022 7:44:00 PM

Carolyn, A preacher said 'There will be good days to make memories. Also bad ones., but the memories will always be good. They're what's left, what remains of us.' -Richard

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/6/2021 8:30:00 AM

How touching! Love this amazing poem..it is a true picture of love! Carolyn, we love you ~ Mala

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/5/2021 9:58:00 AM

What an amazing poem... so lovely that describes a beautiful soul... My prayers... ~ Ani

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/5/2021 7:06:00 AM

I know where this comes from my Dear friend..I'm sure you're happy and safe now.

John Gondolf

Date: 2/16/2020 8:34:00 AM

This is so beautiful, Carolyn, congratulations on your win. Hugs, John

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/16/2020 5:53:00 AM

Fantastic poem.. Great win in the contest Carolyn..

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/15/2020 1:09:00 PM

Wow, Carolyn. Awesome poem. Bravo on your most deserving win. Love it.

Joseph May

Date: 2/15/2020 12:23:00 PM

A longing for a loved one, A moving write Carolyn, Congrats on your win..

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/15/2020 10:57:00 AM

This is so tender, lovely and moving - congratulations on your placement in the contest!

Charles Messina

Date: 1/22/2020 8:34:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Carolyn. Great imagery.. you put your magical touch of ink to it :) Love this! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs Charlie

Paul Callus

Date: 1/22/2020 10:00:00 AM

This lovely, sad poem appeals to our emotions, Carolyn. Once there used to be two sets of footprints on the sand...now just one. Yet there is the consolation of a renewed heavenly relationship. Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2020 2:25:00 PM

this is fantastic, Carolyn. a FAVE for me, and thanks for your contest.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/20/2020 1:55:00 PM

Wow! Poem is great, but the photo appears like you are following Big Foot! Aloha! Rico

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/20/2020 11:02:00 AM

A terrific poem Carolyn, until you meet again, the footprints in the sand are erased by the waves, such an artful write. The vividness and imagery is simply breathtaking. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.