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Follow the Leader

Looking back I see A shadow walking close by I lead, he follows

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/14/2010 7:15:00 PM

Awesome, Larry. Great write. Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/14/2010 3:11:00 PM

A spooky setting, but that's the way it is with shadows. Watch them getting longer now as the days get shorter. The shadow will be far taller than you well before dusk. Great senryu! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/14/2010 1:02:00 PM

Great write Larry, hope you are enjoying your weekend ¤ Wilma

Royal Trevino

Date: 8/14/2010 10:45:00 AM

Heh heh, they follow a little tooo well lol they are well trained shadows, you have a good sense of humor, =(^.^)=Royal

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/14/2010 8:36:00 AM

love it

Audra Carson

Date: 8/14/2010 7:02:00 AM

Ya think!!! Lovin all your poems; and Aechtners, and Guzzi's and sooo many others! They are funny! Wish they were not almost all at my expense. It looks like someone might be keeping and eye on my PC. Seriously, I would like to learn, but it ain't that important to me.."Turtle Soup. What's the deal? Seriously?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/14/2010 6:24:00 AM

Absolute brilliance on this one Larry.. good luck in the contest by Paula... wise words.. from someone who knows himself well.. enjoyed my friend..good luck..with luv.. from high in the sky today..