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Foliage

Sun in shade and rain On the foliage of pain Of pent up warm steam A moment of dark mirror To sit face to face with you __________________________ 11/9/2016

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Date: 9/12/2016 1:03:00 AM
Beautifully written...Wise words...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/12/2016 1:19:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/11/2016 8:07:00 PM
powerful write, probir... well done!,,huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/12/2016 1:20:00 AM
Thank you, nette ...
Date: 9/11/2016 4:55:00 PM
This is beautifully written, with a poetic feel to it and wrapped in a metaphorical mist. Full marks to you, Probir. Regards // paul
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/11/2016 7:59:00 PM
Thank you, Paul for your kind visit and the appreciation .... Regards ...

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