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Foliage

Leaves swayed above the ground-- The elder branches Released pure foliage The wind whistled and crowned The young, dainty leaves With a sweet, mellow scent Leaves land on the damp floors-- The elder branches Released such squalid grief

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/19/2011 10:22:00 AM
Last line...very deep. Excellent job!
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 1/17/2012 1:00:00 PM
Thank you Drake. I shall write again some time

Book: Shattered Sighs