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Fogerty Creek

standing here at waters edge it beckons........ enter feeling the power of each wave hit my body peeling away each layer of my soul my very being! (how) magnificent and (frightening) this power to consume to take me from that place filed with pain and sorrow. i drift.......................... to another shore a star in the distance guides me perhaps, my sweet baby girl calls to me. the roar.................so LOUD thoughts fade into the nothingness (my life has become) VOID of passion! dreams once held me afloat as i weathered the storms now they (release me) to my sadness the (Phantom) no longer waits.................. freedom from pain is at hand sorrow no longer mine, has moved on perhaps to him....... where no forgiveness was shown! my battle ends and his begins. a treasure lost at sea! Shadow

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Date: 8/14/2015 1:39:00 PM
Very, very good! You should do one about your accident there. That too would be powerful.
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Cori Wunderlin
Date: 8/14/2015 3:49:00 PM
Hum what a great idea...I will have to think about that. Unfortunately I do not have your talent for writing. Words just flow from you!

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