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Fog Rolling In

~~ FOG ROLLING IN ~~ A Poem by Debbie_Philly Fog's Rolling In Fog is rolling in , man is it creepy half a block from the beach It's 11:30 pm guess tomorrow will be humid Looks like fog anyway could be the twisted tea's clouding my vision and I'm laughing to myself cause I just don't give a **** As I'm sitting on the balcony overlooking the Atlantic. Fog is rolling in it's creepy yet mesmerizing at the same time kind of like my old boyfriends Till then I'll just pray the sea creatures stay in THAT direction. By: Debbie Kelly I wrote this while down the shore

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Erica Kishpaugh

Date: 3/11/2014 7:35:00 AM

Hahaha!!! ""creepy yet mesmerizing .... kind of like my old boyfriends!!"" Too funny

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/5/2014 3:01:00 PM

This site censored a word in one of my more recent submissions not too long ago. I didn't think it was a bad word. Your write reminds me of the years I lived in Ventnor and Margate.

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/8/2014 8:32:00 PM

Hey Robert.... Thanks for reading :) Yes I was in Wildwood at the time.. the Crest in Oct...I never really get down there much anymore... but I do love it... :) Thanks again Robert !!

Chris Boskovski

Date: 2/4/2014 7:49:00 PM

Oh I like it, a lady not afraid to use her manlier vocabulary. lol Nice one, I can picture the fog rolling in now! great poem. :) xoxo

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/5/2014 1:36:00 PM

LOL Thank you.,... I was just goofing off down the shore... Thank you Chris !! :)

Agnes Bugeja

Date: 2/4/2014 12:51:00 AM

Debbie I can so picture this....thank you for sharing

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/4/2014 1:04:00 AM

Thank you so much :)