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Fog On the River

River flows across Down the banks are some buildings There’s a clock tower That sits on the riverside Docks litter the main entrance Beauty is awesome As fog comes to block the scene Fog creates an air Within itself it’s gorgeous Hiding inside its powers Now the scene alters Just the fog is shining through You must feel your way Down the river to go see Where it is that you’re going
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/19/2012 4:40:00 AM
hi Russell .. great poem ..will read to my wife later today as she is in hospital till Christmas Eve for dehydration .. I wrote a blog for poets to read on her condition .. thanks. Ron
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Date: 12/18/2012 7:05:00 PM
Middle stanza makes it sound like a beautiful fog, russell. I think with sun shining thru it would be gorgeous.
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