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Fog In the City

There are many lights that glow in the fog Shadows diluted within the big lights You can see the puffs of the cloud’s long jog The city holds cement instead of bog But the lights that are enveloped are bright There are many lights that glow in the fog Penned up in the city yards are some dogs The streets are lit up, looking very white You can see the puffs of the cloud’s long jog Unlike the country there aren’t any logs But there are curbs to look after in spite There are many lights that glow in the fog The cloud takes in everything like a hog The brilliant fog takes up with tons of height You can see the puffs of the cloud’s long jog Mist creates wetness leaving all with sog But the effect of fog brings one delight There are many lights that glow in the fog You can see the puffs of the cloud’s long jog
Russell Sivey Not for the Contest! Contest entry was Initials on a Tree!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/29/2013 4:54:00 PM
Hi Russell this is very good. Please take another look at mine.Thanks
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Date: 3/26/2013 8:45:00 PM
This is so nice. You know that the fog in the City is different than the fog on the road. i have been in both. It's kind of spooky. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 3/26/2013 3:00:00 PM
You just made a fog look good...
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Date: 3/26/2013 12:11:00 PM
I get a little bad mood of fog, heavy air to breathe in. ..... gives me a headache. - The fog you described with beautiful light that glows, well done Russell. - Wishing you a lovely Easter. (without fog) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/26/2013 8:51:00 AM
Very descriptive work that you have penned..Sometimes there are oasis within a city in a park or someones tiny yard which bring beauty and delight to those who pass by...Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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