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Fog

Cold autumnal morning, Winter warning sounds around As fog seeks to enter And smother the mind From seeing the future Keeping you blind; Fog on the river, Fog on the road, Foot off the gas, fog on the grass; This seeping damp Dressed as clouds Lowering the light Lowering the sounds Fog seeps into every place Attempting to drown The unaware; Fog signals cold in the atmosphere With everywhere enveloped in damp air; Some love the fog As it covers a lot of fears With a cloud that disappears The moment the sun begins to shine; Love the fog, It gives you time to think, Time for reorientation, to find your place, To discover your station; Fog covers a crime, a love, a time to hide, As life goes on around you; When it lifts Time returns to you And fog fills your mind To excuse your time lost in the fog.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/12/2016 7:40:00 AM
Stephen G., Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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