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Below is the poem entitled Fog which was written by poet Sara Kendrick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Fog on the mountain
Totally shroud in a cloud
One ray of sunshine

(This came to me today as I watched Daystar TV--Worship Videos.  This is how I feel 
sometimes totally confused but then I see God. )

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  1. Date: 7/25/2009 9:47:00 AM
    I could just picture that ray of sunshine brightening those clouds--very beautiful haiku & it does make me experience God whenever I see images like that :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2009 7:25:00 PM
    Lovely haiku, Sara. Somehow, for me I see the beacon of a lighthouse guiding me to shore. They appear to be "mountains" from offshore and following one home during a storm one night was the only way I could reach land in the turbulent stormy waters. And I must agree with Cecil; this is very inspirational! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/23/2009 5:59:00 PM
    an inspirational haiku,which describes what most of us feel at least once if not more in our lives,,,Thank you for visiting my poems and reading and leaving comments upon my poetry,,,blessings.Cecil

  1. Date: 7/20/2009 6:42:00 AM
    Very nice haiku Sara, doesn't feels good went that only one ray of sunshine hit you though? is very..very comforting. Diogenes