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Fog

The dense ,murky fog has lifted, but no change ;vision is still ~ impaired

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/23/2023 5:20:00 AM

Hope your not going through this! Great monoku, dear one!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/21/2023 1:27:00 PM

Whoa!! Even after the fog lifted vision as though it was still there. That person has a very serious problem. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/21/2023 5:31:00 AM

a deep thought and and an excellent Monoku a clever write my friend. Hope you are well, miss you. Hugs and love, Jennifer.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/11/2023 3:53:00 PM

A most interesting and thought-provoking poem ... Very well done, Alexis :)

Bill Baker

Date: 7/8/2023 2:52:00 PM

Nice Monoku, Alexis. I could barely see the words as I read it. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/3/2023 4:35:00 PM

Hello Alexis Y. The vision will get better. It takes time to heal. Hugs. /Darlene\

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/18/2023 2:15:00 PM

Your "FOG" is a creative Monoku write. Have Blessed Day............

Michael Tor

Date: 6/16/2023 2:47:00 AM

Love your message in this one Alexis clever you are...

Bill Baker

Date: 6/7/2023 8:26:00 AM

Been there done that ... thanks for sharing the experience in this Monoku, Alexis. Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2023 6:15:00 PM

Good one, Alexis.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/5/2023 5:20:00 AM

love this clever one

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/4/2023 12:25:00 PM

Sometimes we just have to tread with caution even when it seems clear. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2023 10:34:00 AM

- ... I feel that fog, Alexis - Great written :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/4/2023 7:27:00 AM

Wonderful Monoko Alexis. Even the dissipation of fog takes time to completely clear the path, we must be careful.