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Focus To One

"Focus to One" The calm and pure balance that is filled with laughter and open to gift all we smile Mesmerized by the fire in her eyes his feet begin to warm from the depths of his river Filled with the wealth of knowledge and wisdom of change he cares for her gracefully and gently She is replenished her scattered flames are now focused everlasting coals To heal his burden and love his pain Amy Renaud

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2016 3:59:00 PM

Hello Amy, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@,

Florence Mcmillian

Date: 1/8/2016 3:41:00 PM

Hi Amy, your poem is beautiful and very touching. It truly inspires me to have hope to find that true someone who I'll be able to "Focus to One" with someday too. I hope you share many more poems to lift others. Thanks!! Love your good friend, Flo :-)

Skat A

Date: 1/8/2016 2:46:00 PM

Amy,,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT