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Flying Up In the Skies

My dear , I don't know how shall I start But my love for you was set before we met I don't know how as it's deep in my heart I believe that's crazy like Romeo's love for Juliet Baby , my love for you is like a waterfall I can't escape it but I must go down I am addicted to your love , that's all So don't hurt my heart and leave , It's a letdown My pretty angel , I need you by my side And from life , I wish nothing more As you know that passion is my guide And without you , nothing worth living for Let's walk along the seashore till the dawn light Holding hands , I wanna keep looking at your eyes Baby , they are shinnig like the stars , so bright With you , I feel I am flying up in the skies Oh yeah , I feel I am flying up in the skies I feel I am flying up in the skies By: A. Badr

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2015 7:50:00 PM

Ahmed, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/26/2014 7:22:00 PM

very beautifully painted piece

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/21/2014 5:39:00 AM

Congrats on the win,

Ahmed Badr
Date: 9/24/2014 10:57:00 AM

thanks :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/20/2014 10:37:00 PM

Congrats on your win!!

Ahmed Badr
Date: 9/24/2014 10:59:00 AM

thanks :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/20/2014 10:58:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win!

Ahmed Badr
Date: 9/24/2014 10:56:00 AM

thanks

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2014 9:40:00 AM

Ahmed, this poem, was a wrong entry. However, I gave you an Honorable mention... Hope you enjoy and take a look at the other winning poems... Congratulations!!! Thank you for the support, Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

Ahmed Badr
Date: 9/24/2014 10:49:00 AM

Thanks but I don't understand that contradictory words , how am I supposed to win though it's a wrong entry?? and i don't understand what you mean by that blog

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/28/2014 8:12:00 PM

Ahmed, no problem... thank you for the reply

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2014 6:14:00 PM

Ahmed, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~

Ahmed Badr
Date: 7/28/2014 2:11:00 PM

Thanks PD , I am really so glad , I don't know what to say , I hope you like my next poems

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/26/2014 8:21:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Ahmed. I enjoyed reading this first poem you posted. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/26/2014 9:35:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ahmed :) - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ahmed Badr
Date: 7/26/2014 1:10:00 PM

Thanks Anne , I hope you read more of my poems :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/25/2014 6:28:00 PM

Ha, Ahmed, I too am learning and taking a small break from writing a lot. I will check to see if you have another poem for me to enjoy..Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/25/2014 5:58:00 PM

Hi Ahmed, , Thank you for the comment on my comment. I am looking forward, in hearing from you again. You will enjoy this site, I guaranteed or my fun poetry name isn't PD :) I highly recommend the blog area, there you can read what is hot, and what is going on here at The Poetry Soup. If you like click on some of the side features ((-UNDER- the area where it reads "Member Poets/Poems")) to the left of this comment. -That's my favorite soup section. If you scroll down to where it reads "Contests" you will enjoy the "Contest Winners: Member " feature. Click away, and check out what's cooking. Enjoy reading and following, many of the incoming winners. "I SURE DO." Please feel free to comment and read any of my poems, if you'd like. My poems are not the easiest to understand:) I'm still learning myself. However, I enjoy encouraging others. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. I might be able to help, if not I will recommend someone. Take Care~LINDA~

Ahmed Badr
Date: 7/25/2014 6:09:00 PM

Thanks so much for showing concern , I 'll be glad to see your comments on my poems. Sure I 'll read your poems , that 'll be an honor for me and 'll teach me much no doubt

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/25/2014 4:34:00 PM

Ahmed,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ahmed Badr
Date: 7/25/2014 5:56:00 PM

Linda , Thanks for your support , I really appreciate it , I am glad to enter your contest , and it will be an honor for me if you followed me to read more poems , I have already written many poems and I 'll be glad to publish them on poetry soup

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/25/2014 3:19:00 PM

Hi Ahmed, this is such a beautiful, romantic write! Lovely piece which I enjoyed reading! Bravo!

Ahmed Badr
Date: 7/25/2014 3:49:00 PM

thanks Panadita for your encouragment