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Flying Raisins

Flying raisins are in the air,there are flying raisins everywhere I see them flying all around, I see them landing on the ground I wish they would just go away, but they’ll just come back another day I see them flying in the sky, I see them getting in my pie I see them walking on my cake, I see them in everything I make I wish they would just go away, but they’ll just come back another day I find them in my cookie dough, I don’t know why they just won’t go I do not like them can’t you see, flying raisins are all over me! I don’t know where they come from, I just want them to leave There’s three or four more on my shirt, and two more on my sleeve Then I saw the open box, sitting high upon the rack I pulled it down then turned it around, it said, “ CAUTION “ on the back It said, not for use in cooking, such as cookies, cakes or pies For I thought I bought a box of raisins, but they were laboratory flies Note: This was my very first poem that I ever put on a website and it turned out to be a wonderful thing to pick PoetrySoup. I was not sure what people would say about my poem. I didn't know if I could grab the attention of the reader, have them hold it to the end and give them a chuckle or a laugh. I am glad that I tried. People on the Soup liked it. I made many Friends. They gave me confidence to write more. So I did. And it made me a better writer.

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Date: 3/8/2015 12:36:00 PM
Hello Roger, Congratulations, on your fine win. <3 LINDA <3
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Roger Horsch
Date: 3/9/2015 6:04:00 AM
Hello Linda, Thank you on the congrats. It is always nice to hear from my friend that is Many Miles Away......Hugs......Roger
Date: 3/5/2015 11:35:00 PM
Roger, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Beginnings Matter Win ~SKAT~
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Roger Horsch
Date: 3/6/2015 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Skat, It was very nice to hear from you.
Date: 3/5/2015 12:26:00 AM
Congrats on a superb job Roger, well done
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Roger Horsch
Date: 3/5/2015 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Mark, I hope that the rest of my poems are just as good.......Roger
Date: 3/4/2015 6:34:00 PM
This is a cute first poem to post Roger. I enjoyed the humor. Congrats on it winning #1 place.
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Roger Horsch
Date: 3/5/2015 8:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie, It was nice that you enjoyed it......Roger
Date: 3/4/2015 10:27:00 AM
love the humour at the end of the poem - I too went for humour with my first post but it was my husbands cancer which brought me to writing and my first poem I wrote was 'splendid isolation' this was posted later - as I wanted to be known for my humour:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Roger Horsch
Date: 3/5/2015 8:44:00 AM
Thank you Jan, I went for the humor at the end.....Roger
Date: 3/2/2014 10:20:00 PM
Flying raisins and then flying butter. Crazy what the FDA is doing to our food supply these days. ; ) Hugs, Juliet.
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Roger Horsch
Date: 3/3/2014 8:58:00 AM
I love your sense of humor Juliet, When I laugh, I am feeling my best. Thank you. You have been a good friend.....Hugs....Roger
Date: 12/19/2013 4:44:00 PM
.. How adorable I decided to stop by your first poem.... xoooolllllll----I placed the first comment..... Awe, now I feel special.... Thanks for all the kind support... Roger, sorry to hear about them laboratory flies. ..lol... xox...LINDA
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Date: 12/19/2013 5:36:00 PM
I'm still wondering if it's the gossiping is flying above your ears... JK
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/19/2013 5:35:00 PM
Okay, I got to admit.. I love flying raisins in my soup... LOL
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/19/2013 5:20:00 PM
Your so silly. I like flying raisins. Just not in my cookies, cakes or pies The only pies that are ok to have flying raisins in them and on them... are cow pies. Now I'm being silly...Hugs...Roger
Date: 12/6/2013 8:41:00 AM
I can see this as a children's book, well done! Great first contribution to the soup.
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Date: 12/6/2013 9:17:00 AM
To write something that is for children is a true blessing. Thanks again Richard....Roger
Date: 11/22/2013 10:16:00 PM
hahaha, GREAT twist at the end. You are lucky I happened to click on that poem of yours at the top again, or i would never have seen your reply to my comment. I remember there was a Seuss type contest a long time ago. Did this one get a win. It looks like you got some congrats for this one being featured. Congrats for that.
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Roger Horsch
Date: 11/23/2013 6:34:00 AM
Thanks for reading this poem. It has never been in a contest. But was featured on the home page. I'll enter this one if the right contest is available
Date: 10/9/2013 7:49:00 PM
Roger This is a very creative and fun write. The reader is taken on a journey of raisin attacks but in a crazy way. Nice job
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Roger Horsch
Date: 11/23/2013 6:28:00 AM
Thank you for your nice words. I love to have fun.
Date: 8/31/2013 9:46:00 PM
Roger, , Congratulations :-) on having your poem Featured on the soups Home Page... always~ Linda
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Roger Horsch
Date: 9/2/2013 6:49:00 PM
I can't find it on the home page and by the way thank you for the Congratulations
Date: 8/16/2013 10:41:00 PM
wow Roger, exciting, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *"
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Roger Horsch
Date: 8/26/2013 8:09:00 AM
Thanks for your nice words about my " Flying Raisins " poem. I am a man that loves to write from my heart. It is a pleasure to submit some of my poems here on the soup. Your new friend in poetry. Roger
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Roger Horsch
Date: 8/17/2013 8:41:00 AM
Hello Skat, First I would like to thank you for your nice words, and for your warm welcome. I have been a writer of Christian poetry for some years now. But as you can see I like to write to have fun also. I thank you and I feel honored to have you as a friend in poetry. Roger
Date: 8/16/2013 9:57:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Roger ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2013 8:23:00 AM
Good morning Roger, I have to say this is a very entertaining first poem on he soup. Are you talking about gossip...perhaps not,,, LOL, however I do hope they stop aiming your way. , -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Roger Horsch
Date: 8/27/2013 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Linda for your wonderful words and for making me feel welcome. Your new friend in poetry. Roger

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