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Flying Mystery

as i glide in the in wind the clouds are so white i feel like i am blinded by a light but as i glide farther through the clouds i see a shadow in the distance it moves as i move like if it were gliding in the same direction the shadow seems like a statue just sitting at a far distance floating away so i close my eyes and open them again the shadow is still there but it seems to be getting closer this time as i glide closer and closer the shadow changes and as it changes i see the form of a lady i feel a breeze on the back of my neck the clouds around me become to move faster and faster passed me as i get close to this shadow like lady the clouds grow dark as she opens her eyes she holds out her hand out her palm facing up and eyes white as the clouds once were she doesnt say anything but its as if shes trying to save me i felt a thin air of wind glide across the back of my neck reaching for her hand i close my eyes i feel the touch of her hand and i open my eyes again the clouds are white again they start to fade away as the blue sky arises holding this ladies hand, the clouds fade under my feet i fall as she falls.........still floating in mid air and falling in love

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Date: 3/29/2010 10:59:00 AM
This is very Beautiful Devon!!! I mean it, this is extremely wonderful :)
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Date: 3/28/2010 5:20:00 PM
lovely poem, enjoyed
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Date: 3/24/2010 10:58:00 AM
Wow, thats epic. Brilliant words....it sort of captures you in a story like spell. Always .:Rain:.
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Date: 3/19/2010 2:57:00 PM
Ayy bro this is sickkk!!!! keep it up dog!
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Date: 3/18/2010 1:09:00 PM
Devon, You are to hard on yourself. Your writing is as good as everyone here. You put feeling into your writing, and thats what every poet should do. if you need any help just contact me at annachebukina@yahoo.com i would be glad to help.^_^ Much Respecft, Anna
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Date: 3/16/2010 12:36:00 PM
its a very interesting poem...don't worry about whether or not you know how to do poetry...its a matter of fact that you can express your creativity through words in whatever form you want...godd job and keep up the great work...God Bless...-Brittany-
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Date: 3/16/2010 5:36:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Devon. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2010 5:12:00 PM
welcome to poetry soup, hope you enjoy writing, and continue to share with us. enjoyed reading today.
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Date: 3/15/2010 2:47:00 PM
Interesting write Devon - I like it - Thankyou for sharing -:)
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