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I started writing a sonnet just one for fun then had to lay it down to do something for a family member then my sonnet took a turn that I had not anticipated..Sara
Pastel Easter dresses on morn's sunrise After a long cold windy spring night But now the golden sun is shining bright Giving promise of all day sunny skies Baby pears adorn the Barlett pear tree Blueberries hang on the Blueberry bush Pale pink rose that on trellis grows has blush Baby birds in lined snug nest waiting to fly free Free as baby bird flying free what freedom No more excess chores to occupy day Just to sit close to Him to forever stay Fly away freedom from pain nor more serfdom Promise of beautiful day externally Promise of free life eternally Click on about this poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/27/2012 5:35:00 PM
I love your descriptions in this poem Sara. You painted a beautiful rhyme here ...Samia
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Date: 4/27/2012 12:47:00 AM
Nice my dear beautiful poetess.
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Date: 4/26/2012 4:50:00 PM
Oh to have wings, Last two lines are a clever way to end this lovely verse!
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Date: 4/26/2012 3:13:00 AM
Really enjoyed this enclosed rhyme poem Sara, and i have sent you soup mail..)
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Date: 4/25/2012 7:21:00 PM
nicely done Sara..regards...Joseph
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Date: 4/25/2012 4:29:00 PM
sara, this is one of your best poems. Very descriptive and pretty.
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Date: 4/25/2012 3:20:00 PM
I read your "about this poem" and you do have a unique sonnet style here, Sara. While reading it, I was caught up in the images of the blueberries, birds, flowerw and the Bartlett pear tree with baby pears on it. Thank you for taking me on this flight of freedom! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/25/2012 3:05:00 PM
Beautiful poem to go with a beautiful picture Mrs. Sara. Sometimes I wish I could fly like this. The time will come, until then I am becoming more and more content to bide my time in his service by encouraging others to be ready to sprout wings when their time comes. Lovely poetry, you had a nice rhythm and your end rhymes were tactful. I liked the third stanza immensely, but the second one had great imagery as well.
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Date: 4/25/2012 2:19:00 PM
Smile ~ This Is A Very Picturesque & Beautiful Painting, Beautiful Sara ~ Love Always, John!:) ~
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Date: 4/25/2012 12:43:00 PM
Excellent imagery here Sara.Wonderful lines penned by you in this poem.Enjoyed.
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