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Flying Feathers

Eagle swooping down Feathers floating to the earth- Two birds become one July 12, 2015

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/16/2015 5:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win a 7. Hugs Eve

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/16/2015 3:06:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Jan. Congrats! hugs

Constance La France

Date: 7/16/2015 11:54:00 AM

Janece so beautifully penned 7 , congratulations and thanks for visiting my haiku 13

James Inman

Date: 7/16/2015 11:02:00 AM

One of my favorites in this wonderful contest. Beautiful dichotomy between love and death.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/16/2015 10:46:00 AM

lovely imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 11:16:00 PM

Janece, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/15/2015 11:00:00 PM

.. and that should read 'Derby' Cathedral. I need new keyboard or new eyes, not sure which. Viv x

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/15/2015 10:59:00 PM

Great, crashing piece of imagery, Janece. We get peregrines nesting here at Derny Cathedral- occasionally get to see one hurtle into a flock of pigeons. Quite a spectacle. Viv x

Jan Terry
Date: 7/16/2015 12:46:00 PM

Saw a young eagle take another bird out of the air in the mountains at Big Bear Lake, CA. He landed, with his prey, in a tall tree and the other bird was devoured in no time. The scene has always stayed with me. So graphic and raw, yet so fascinating. Janece

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2015 10:46:00 PM

Janece:) Congratulations on your awesome feather win. **SKAT**

Darlene Gifford

Date: 7/13/2015 6:11:00 PM

I liked your Flying Feathers poem, and good luck in the contest.

Jan Terry
Date: 7/13/2015 6:25:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. I enjoyed your Haiku titled 'Dream Feathers'. Good luck to you, as well.