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A bird that's born in a gilded cage learns of flying at an early age Even though it must call its own home a perch inside its small, golden dome. To spread its small wings one day, to soar over mountains, oceans, even more to fly to greet early morning star are but dreams behind its golden bar. To sit atop snowy mountains high observe the world with a keen bird's eye To meet those flocks it has never known and tell bird tales of skies it has flown it sings of life beyond golden gate its songs are of the joy that awaits when it can fly in an endless space flying in a cloud, touching wind's face Though the bird in cage will never know its songs are sweet as in a meadow it cannot fly because of clipped wings but it can dream, so lovely bird sings. February 16, 2023 for "Writing Challenge - F Words" by Constance La France Flying howmanysyllables.com=9

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Date: 2/23/2023 10:27:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your well-deserved contest win.
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Date: 2/22/2023 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being on Constance's winners' list. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/21/2023 12:32:00 PM
Ann, this so reminds me of I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings. Dreams live even when they don't have wings. Well done. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/24/2023 4:01:00 PM
I know. I didn't want the title to encroach on Maya Angelou's title of her incredible poem, but I couldn't come up with a good title. :)
Date: 2/21/2023 9:20:00 AM
Ann, a wonderful poem and congratulations on your win my Writing Challenge - F Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/19/2023 11:24:00 AM
Anne, Again you touch on all our dreams. Love this..........so hopeful and at same time, appreciative..They ARE flying back! Another winner! Like the wind 'neath my sails...........suzanne
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Date: 2/18/2023 7:35:00 PM
Just gorgeous, Anne. 'The Caged Bird Sings' -- most definitely. A Great write. Thanks, Gershon
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/20/2023 4:56:00 PM
I hate to see birds alone in a cage. I had two lovebirds--little parrots. I let them fly each day when I cleaned their cage. I miss them. Thanks, Gershon! You're so nice!
Date: 2/17/2023 1:41:00 AM
Wonderful imagination. So many birds in captivity, but at least they are fed and produce songs. Best for a win.
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/20/2023 4:59:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. It would help, I think, if people would give them a friend. We all need a friend :)
Date: 2/16/2023 7:09:00 PM
Ann, such a fantastic work is a delight to read. Your work is made even more beautiful by the wondrous diction and metaphors you employ. Win big
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/20/2023 4:53:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad, but you're the one with the beautiful words!

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