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Flyin' Free

My wings are wide
Slicing through the air
Nothing to hide
Life is how I see fair

I look down and see
The world down so far
And then there is me
A lone bright shining star

So in case you haven't heard
Just look up to see
I'm flyin' like a bird
I'm flyin' free

I hope the world sees me!

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  1. Date: 12/3/2009 3:45:00 PM
    I love the "free spirit" quality to this poem, Jen. And surely the world can see one whose "wings are wide" and has "Nothing to hide." Great quatrain! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/3/2009 10:28:00 AM
    Thank you Jen for sharing your amazing poetry with us all today. I enjoyed the read. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 6:37:00 PM
    Cool Quatrain Jen. Zat you on t'other side of the cloud from me? You lookin free!

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 5:50:00 PM
    Hope your pen doesn't skip out and the ideas flow, fluidly!

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 5:15:00 PM
    i see you happy girl . John H Loving III