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When shadows of despair creep in my mind, They splash iridescent hues of hope - Those chirping birds in my backyard I find; When shadows of despair creep in my mind, The morning symphony of these birds from behind, Raises me up from the gloom I grope; When shadows of despair creep in my mind, They splash iridescent hues of hope. Date: 05/24/2021 Submitted for: Try A Triolet Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Date: 6/14/2021 10:26:00 AM
A creative write. "Beautiful" Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 6/5/2021 11:41:00 PM
On despair and hope, what a lovely pair of two starting lines! Perhaps that is what a triolet supposed to do, for it has to end with them as well.
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Date: 5/30/2021 12:14:00 AM
your poes are so sweet, so clever and give me much enjoyment, I love reading the. I know you would like to be on soup much more, and so would I, but obligations are part of life and must be attended to, what would we be if we didn't care, a nothing, and you sound like the most adorable person to know and thank God we met on soup.. Hugs am blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/25/2021 8:18:00 PM
Ani, congrats on your win in my contest with this lovely triolet! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/25/2021 11:23:00 AM
Agreed Ani. Morning does dawn with hope. Congratulations on your win with its celebration of dawn and hope.
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Date: 5/24/2021 11:07:00 PM
Hi Anitha, You penned such a good triolet. I enjoyed it very much. Congratulations on a fine win. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/24/2021 10:44:00 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/24/2021 4:13:00 PM
You are SO good, Anitha. I sure hope this gets you a win. I think it's one of the best I have read recently.
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Date: 5/24/2021 2:08:00 AM
What a charming triolet, Ani. Well done.
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Date: 5/23/2021 10:53:00 PM
It's beautiful.
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Date: 5/23/2021 1:52:00 PM
Good one. I enjoyed. God bless you sweet friend. You're a inspiration. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/23/2021 12:45:00 PM
Nice tiolet, Anitha. I wish you well in the contest. This is a good one!
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