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Children fly away with wings of strength when designed in a home of love. Fly little bird, fly away, you are fresh and new and young. Spread the joy and hope of life, and leave no song unsung. Fly little bird, fly away...but carry the love and care shared with you in the humble nest...reflect it everywhere. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Premiere Contest: One and One Sponsor: Rick Parise Judged: 09/10/2016 Rules: One Original Quote and One 4 line Verse / Stanza on any theme. Any form acceptable.

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James Inman

Date: 9/20/2016 8:05:00 AM

A beautiful write Sandra.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 9/15/2016 9:08:00 PM

A beautiful thought, Sandra. Congrats on your win. You stated well the POV of my almost 3 year old grandson who took off today on his own down the sidewalk on his motorized (slow) car. He stayed on the sidewalk and was headed around the curve ready to conquer the world before a neighbor came to tell us our little one was loose. She said, I was watching him and he didn't get out in the street.

Laura Hay

Date: 9/14/2016 10:44:00 AM

Simply beautiful Sandra, and congrats too!, warm regards Laura.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/12/2016 1:43:00 AM

Congratulations. Nice one.

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/10/2016 11:54:00 PM

Lovely write. Congrats, Sunita :)

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 9/10/2016 9:27:00 PM

Lovely Verse imbued with a mother's love! Congrats for topping the list! Best Wishes Sushma

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/10/2016 5:40:00 PM

Beautiful and so true - congrats on our win, Sandra! It's a shame that only four lines were allowed; I would have liked to keep reading. Agnes

Meenakshi Raina

Date: 9/10/2016 4:42:00 PM

What a beautiful write! Congratulations on your win...Dear Sandra...now you can add more to it...make it a full poem......it flows so well...all the best.

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/10/2016 1:05:00 PM

Congrats!!! Sandra on first place...a beautiful tribute to children and love...god bless...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/10/2016 12:55:00 PM

Oh Sandra, how inspiring this beautiful poem is. Congratulations on your deserving first placement! I love this amazing poem. I admire the Dalai Lama, and support his causes to free Tibet. The quote above from him is awe inspiring. This poem of yours is a fave from me my friend! Brava! 7 ; )