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Reflex arc to soar the bird climbs higher until the wind breaks the wing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/14/2009 2:06:00 PM
Beautifully poised.
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:21:00 AM
Excellent Haiku Erica. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2009 6:26:00 PM
Very evokative Haiku, dear Erica. Thank you for your kind comments on my writing. lainie
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Date: 9/10/2009 1:48:00 PM
Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. You may want to put something in the title so people can access this easier. You can do that by editing. Enjoyed this haiku. Thank you for sharing it. Keep on writing! Karen
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