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Fluttering wishes

 A  "butterfly  blooms" on  fluttering wishes
Floating  on aroma of 'lilac kisses"
Like ''a kiss of sunshine''   at break of  dawn
With "golden hues"  to greet the morn

These "aerial dancers" awaken "spring blooms"
 Like "raindrops on roses"  on a summer afternoon
 That "awaken"  the petals in the month of June
While "fireflies dance"  in the absence of moon

 "Sweet kisses"  of  butterflies  "flying high"
Like a "melody"  that plays to a "blue sky"
"Butterfly kisses"  travel "where the wind blows''
Spreading love wherever they  go

 For the Title contest

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  1. Date: 9/9/2013 9:50:00 PM
    Loved all the butterflies Joseph...congratulations

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 8:26:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 8:04:00 PM
    beautiful poem....congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 5:46:00 PM
    yours was such a delightful entry, Joseph. Big congrats on your win with this sweet poem.

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:27:00 PM
    Congratulations Joseph,,, always~ Linda

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 2:49:00 PM
    I enjoyed your winning poem, congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 10:31:00 AM
    Beautiful write and win Joseph. Hugs

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 10:08:00 AM
    Joseph, congratulations on your win. I think your entry really accomplished what all entries strived for..... Jake

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 8:23:00 AM
    This turned out so beautifully, one would not know it consists mostly of titles. Light as spring rain....this is a beauty! Congrats!!

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 7:26:00 AM
    Good morning Joseph, , Congratulations on your win ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 9:26:00 AM
    A sweet verse! Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting on my verse. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 9:49:00 PM
    Another beauty you've created, Joseph! Another favorite to enjoy for all time! Best wishes for the contest and it's already a winner to me! x Annalise

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 3:55:00 AM
    Ahhh!!! Reads like a winner..It has great flow..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 8/21/2013 5:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Sara
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 12:59:00 AM
    I really like yours alot, One of my favorites for this particular contest.

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 8/21/2013 5:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Andrea
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 11:18:00 AM
    - A wonderful poem, Joseph. - Luck in contest!!! - All the best to you. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 8/20/2013 6:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Anne
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 6:52:00 AM
    Is this for the challenge using poem titles. YOu used your titles very effectively to draw the lines together!

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 8/20/2013 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea...yes it is...I may still do some tweaking on it