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Fluttering Hearts

The brightest star will one day die Its light will shine no more Even the effervescent butterfly Will one day fall to the forest floor Ending the flutter of its reign Never to rise again The love we thought would never end Had lost its passion over time Now we have become just friends With unspoken words we mime Our love is like a gypsy that roams the land Moving to the beat of a distant band Not having a sense of permanence But just a fleeting presence Our hearts now flutter like the wings of a butterfly But love's eternal beat will never die -----~~------------ Contest name - Rhyme Battle Sponsor - Juli Michelle 10 -5 - 2013 ----------------------------------------------

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Date: 10/10/2013 8:33:00 PM
Hi Joseph, , congrats with your winning poem in the rhyme battle.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 10/9/2013 6:09:00 PM
Joseph, a BIG congrats on your rhyme battle win! A beautiful and poignant write! Well done!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/8/2013 8:28:00 PM
Joseph, awesome rhyme battle win.............SKAT
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Date: 10/7/2013 9:57:00 AM
Great Write Joseph-- lovely analogies and metaphors.. and rhyming of course. Good luck for the contest xx
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Date: 10/6/2013 7:44:00 PM
you captured me with the first line, and held it with your rhyme. Congratulations in my contest, thank you for sharing your poem with me. Love, Juli-Michelle
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Joseph May
Date: 10/6/2013 10:21:00 PM
thank you for my placement in your contest Juli
Date: 10/6/2013 12:56:00 AM
very nicely done, Joseph. I like the message in it.
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Date: 10/5/2013 6:46:00 PM
These words are full of passion and heart. Very deep and insightful. Its moving and pulls the reader in. nice job
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Joseph May
Date: 10/5/2013 8:09:00 PM
thank you Robin...a pleasure to see you
Date: 10/5/2013 3:29:00 PM
This is not only a marvelous rhyming poem is is just marvelous.....
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Joseph May
Date: 10/5/2013 8:08:00 PM
thank you Donna...always good to see you

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