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Fluid

Are you Someone that loves, Accepting my passion, Allowing it to flow from me Like wine into a Waterford wine glass? Will yours flow, too, into that glass, Sharing with me, the time, The place, the love? Are you?

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Sharon Winter

Date: 8/1/2008 7:39:00 AM

Well, I just bet she is. Nice work with this form of poetry! Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 7/31/2008 11:57:00 PM

Nice work Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/31/2008 9:06:00 PM

Hi Michael - Interesting form - Very beautiful poem - Always a pleasure to read your work - I learn a lot from it - God Bless Michael

Jim Wilson

Date: 7/31/2008 12:54:00 PM

Very nice Michael. I've never seen this form before, so it's nice to be introduced to it with such a good example.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/31/2008 11:59:00 AM

Michael just lovely! Laura :)

Date: 7/31/2008 11:55:00 AM

Interesting use of this challenging form. The title is fitting for the piece. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your ongoing support. Best wishes with your writing. Have a good day! Karen