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Fluffy Marshmallows

The fluffy white clouds Are spreading coolness and shade; Relief from the sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/18/2008 1:24:00 PM
Nice haiku, clouds do look like marshmallows. DN
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Date: 12/18/2008 2:27:00 AM
Great imagery Caramel, I can relate to the vision you are pulling from. You are a Master of the short verse...Raul
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