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Fluff the Tragic Dragon

The Royal Dragon, Fluff, was ugly and mean. Things she did were cruel and obscene. She was so wrong, it inspired a song. "Fluff, the Tragic Dragon, Queen"!

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Adrienne Gresham

Date: 2/18/2012 6:10:00 PM

Sounds like the makings of a cartoon, thanks for sharing. Thanks for your kind remarks

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/18/2012 4:15:00 PM

This is so cute, I see why it won. I just can't write Limericks. To me they are very difficult. You did very well. Congratulations!

Erich Goller

Date: 2/18/2012 1:38:00 PM

Congratulation Ralph, a lovely funny Limerick.God bless you. Erich

Dalila Agtani

Date: 2/12/2012 9:45:00 AM

Changing the puff to a fluff and magic to a tragic is clever! I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for reading my poem, Dalila

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 2/11/2012 2:13:00 PM

How cute Ralph-Great play on words w/ your last two-love it!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/11/2012 2:03:00 PM

Must have been a PMS or Menapausal Queen..Enjoyed reading this one today..Got a chuckle..I feel like that queen sometimes..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/10/2012 12:29:00 PM

Sweet and funny Ralph! Good luck! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/10/2012 12:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in my "FLUFF" contest Ralph. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/10/2012 7:45:00 AM

congrats Ralph on an excellent win for fluff words luv..

David Williams

Date: 2/10/2012 2:32:00 AM

Ralph congrats on your win,love this one and the title..David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/10/2012 1:19:00 AM

Still laughing Ralph congratualations love it xx Thanks for your lovely comments xx

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/9/2012 8:13:00 PM

Love the spoof of that last line!! So cute...and a clever poem, Ralph! Congratulations!

Carol Eastman

Date: 2/9/2012 6:09:00 PM

LOL... Loved it! Congratulations on your win.

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 2/9/2012 4:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Ralph, love elizabeth

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 2/9/2012 7:47:00 AM

I love the play on Puff the Magic Dragon - very clever! good luck in the contest :)

Jack Horne

Date: 2/8/2012 1:12:00 PM

LOL, good one, Ralph. Many congrats on your wins : )

Don Johnson

Date: 2/7/2012 4:02:00 PM

love it mate...like the flow...n rhymin rate..

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/7/2012 3:10:00 PM

Well i like it, RALPH, i think Robert's comment below, could be on the right track. made me smile, thanks, harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2012 8:54:00 PM

It could describe a lady going around on Soup leaving nasty comments to people. hahaha. ME LIKES!! (I think Debs meant to say "booger". hahaha)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/6/2012 3:17:00 PM

LOL..maybe he he was stuffy not fluffy maybe he had a bogger in his snout? Light & Love

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/6/2012 3:14:00 PM

Could this have been a hit song if Peter Paul and Mary recorded it? You have a good entertaining limerick here Ralph.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/5/2012 8:17:00 PM

Okay..who said PUFF or FLUFF was a gurlie girl dragon?..ha ha. I love how your word play created such a fantabulous poem...the contest will now be complete with this outstanding fluffy puffy entry! Great going for Ralph!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/4/2012 10:51:00 AM

This is so bad its great! I LOVE IT. BG

Bob Quigley

Date: 2/4/2012 10:42:00 AM

LOL Ralph. I love groaners and this is a groaner. Good luck in the contest. I'd vote for you.