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I lay on the bed idling my time, My husbands in the bathroom he’s doing fine. He comes to bed and slips under the covers We lay together we were going to be lovers. I let my fingers walk across his midriff, They fell in a hole as big as though off a cliff. The good thing I found even though in a huff They had a soft landing with all the belly button fluff.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/10/2012 1:47:00 PM
Awesome write Mandy. Congrats on your win in carol's contest. I always enjoy reading your work.
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Date: 2/10/2012 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my "FLUFF" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2012 8:01:00 AM
congrats Mandy on an excellent win for this touching fluff luv..
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Date: 2/10/2012 2:06:00 AM
Mandy congrats on your great win..liked it first time..David
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Date: 2/9/2012 6:04:00 PM
Congrats, Mandy. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 2/9/2012 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Mandy, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/7/2012 3:27:00 PM
seems like we are just like washing machines, we have a fluff collecter.... great piece of poetry here xox
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Date: 2/6/2012 5:17:00 AM
Mandy when we were kids my brother would put a plaster over his belly button to keep it dry in the bath as he thought it was there to protect his belly button..idiot..ha ha .. best of luck..David
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Date: 2/6/2012 5:50:00 AM
Hi David , its a good job there is such a veriety of us to make up this world, that is so funny xx
Date: 2/4/2012 8:49:00 AM
ha! funny entry for the contest! i'm sure carol will love this -how innocently your fingers are walking then whoosh, into a hole! thank goodness for that fluff ;p
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Date: 2/5/2012 2:23:00 AM
Hi Susann and thanks missed your comments xx
Date: 2/4/2012 8:07:00 AM
lol I love this.
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Date: 2/5/2012 2:22:00 AM
Thanks Lisa nice of you to comment much appreciated promise willl check out some of yours later xx
Date: 2/4/2012 5:44:00 AM
unusal subject, wonderful imagery, and a brilliant mind to pen this. harry.
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Date: 2/4/2012 6:23:00 AM
To many compliments but i love . Thank you so much wish others thought I had a brilliant mind, good job I know it and now you do ah ah. Keep your chin up xx
Date: 2/3/2012 11:33:00 AM
Oh how romantic and funny too, nicely done, all the best in the contest, Greg
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Date: 2/4/2012 2:33:00 AM
Thanks Greg and for taking the time to comment x
Date: 2/2/2012 6:26:00 PM
LOL a contest on belly fluff? hmmmm Light & Love
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Date: 2/3/2012 1:29:00 AM
Go on debbie admit it you have some somtimes... thanks x
Date: 2/2/2012 1:24:00 PM
In golf terms, its a belly button divot....... George
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Date: 2/3/2012 1:28:00 AM
Will check the divot later George xx
Date: 2/2/2012 1:17:00 PM
LOL, had a good chuckle, Mandy. Many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 2/3/2012 1:27:00 AM
Thansk jack xx
Date: 2/2/2012 8:46:00 AM
so cute and clever Mandy.. picturing the scenario and smiling.. good luck in the fluff contest.. reads like a winner to me luv..
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Date: 2/3/2012 1:26:00 AM
Ta xx
Date: 2/1/2012 5:44:00 PM
It is funny how different writers handle this subject. You did a good job with this one and it should do well in the contest. Mike
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Date: 2/2/2012 2:24:00 AM
Horses for courses mike x
Date: 2/1/2012 4:18:00 PM
this is SO cute, Mandy!!! I was thinking of doing the belly button fluff myself. YOu did it GREAT.
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Date: 2/2/2012 2:24:00 AM
Go ahead I would like to see someone as crazy as me xx
Date: 2/1/2012 12:46:00 PM
My brother used to lay on his back, fill his belly button with salt and dip celery sticks in it.
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Date: 2/1/2012 12:51:00 PM
I hope you didn't take a bite !! x
Date: 2/1/2012 12:38:00 PM
good entry with this creative write Mandy, best wishes Elizabeth
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Date: 2/1/2012 12:51:00 PM
Thanks Elizabeth x
Date: 2/1/2012 12:27:00 PM
Thank you Robert.x
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Date: 2/1/2012 11:32:00 AM
Nice to read. Simply written and easy to understand while having no trouble conveying clear images to the reader's mind.
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Date: 2/1/2012 11:10:00 AM
charming me all the way, mandy... ohh, talk about navels!.. winning;s best!..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/1/2012 12:29:00 PM
Thanks nette xox

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