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Snowflakes are falling
Softly landing on the ground...
Winter ground covering

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  1. Date: 2/3/2012 6:19:00 PM
    I adore this write ... Haiku... Primarily as it seems so light and breezy yet it has solid forms entwined with light ones. Almost placed in a pattern, which in my eyes surrealistically represents a snowflake.I know I sound like I've lost it but that's how I see it.. Karen Deeks

  1. Date: 2/3/2012 1:51:00 PM
    Enjoyable write.

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 2:02:00 PM
    now here you have 1 subject and 2 actions falling & landing and the 3rd line doesn't shift away from the topics so there is no juxtapostion/ try 1 haiku about the snow falling, then one about the snow covering the ground and make sure to PULL BACK or step aside of the image and let us feel something else [or smell it or taste it?] Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 11:18:00 AM
    nice image - what do you think of the old brown snow? the white snow is so pretty at first...

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 1:28:00 AM
    aaawww, so fluffy!! i love it, love everything fluffy. beautiful haiku carol

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 8:47:00 PM
    Aha, here is our motivation for the contest. Snowflakes make GREAT fluff, Carol!!! thanks for being such a great force for good here at Soup.

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 2:25:00 PM
    Nothing but rain up here.

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 2:15:00 PM
    Thank you for my great placement in your contest...I really appreciate that a lot! You are so kind! This Haiku is spectacular, and as you posted this it was happening right then! Now it has mostly melted away today! That way we get the pleasure of the snow and then it leaves us so we can go about our chores! Great Work

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 11:58:00 AM
    Your haiku has created a pretty picture. Thanks for sharing and thank you also for your encouraging notes and comments. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 11:14:00 AM
    Nicely worded the inter touch of nicotine and joy. Loved much where your words are genius, loved, bl

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 8:45:00 AM
    Good one!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 8:31:00 AM
    ohhh I like this haiku...lovely !!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 7:55:00 AM
    Sounds like what was happening here in Brussels today :-)

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 7:50:00 AM
    very good haiku by you Carol.I think this is happening there right now.

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 5:43:00 AM
    Lovely Carol,lovely. oxox love Anne-Lise