Flowing Tears

Contour of her tears Flow down her wet enhanced cheek… Grey clouds spill some rain Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2014 7:42:00 PM

THe last line is wonderful. Love how it goes with the tears.

Jack Horne

Date: 1/26/2014 2:59:00 PM

lovely senyru. Russell

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/26/2014 6:14:00 AM

- Proficient written, Russell ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/26/2014 4:40:00 AM

Nice images, Russell

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/25/2014 5:26:00 PM

fascinating way to create a senryu with a twust in the end, russell... so much meaning in a few wrods... a lovely way to sart my day by reasing this one... grrreat stuff!... huggs

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/25/2014 3:24:00 PM

that happened to me today. weather matching the mood. twice. first I had to sheevle snow that the rain washed away. and next I did have a tear in my eye. a certain song came on that reminded me of you know who.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/25/2014 2:50:00 PM

Good one Russell,the poet in you lives. Kudos. Kayod5

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/25/2014 7:44:00 AM

The weather matches the mood...Thanks for stopping by..Sara