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Flowing Streams

Strolling by flowing streams I pause, Pause as waters buff ancient stones, Stones o'er which water plays its hymns, Hymns that console my troubled soul! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (c) 7 June 2015 All Rights Reserved Entry for nette onclaud's "Four Lines Only" Contest (Visual 2) Tied for No. 1 in the contest.

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Date: 11/15/2015 6:11:00 PM
Excellent poem.
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 11/15/2015 6:56:00 PM
thx Nayda for your support and encouragement. Have a grand week ahead - bob h
Date: 7/22/2015 11:54:00 AM
this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!
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Date: 7/2/2015 10:48:00 AM
Great poem with a lovely message. Thanks for the Grade 7 share.
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Date: 6/15/2015 5:47:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful. A wonderful write.
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Date: 6/14/2015 3:02:00 PM
Well done here Bob..' best wishes on the high win..'
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Date: 6/13/2015 1:57:00 AM
Great stuff Bob, this verse spoke volumes with wonderful imagery. Congrats
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Date: 6/12/2015 7:38:00 PM
Bob, Congratulations on your 4 line win. Hugs SKAT
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 6/13/2015 3:44:00 PM
Thank you Skat - I cherish your continuing support and kind comments - bob h
Date: 6/12/2015 5:49:00 PM
I love this, Bob! It matches the visual so well. Congrats on your well-deserved 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/12/2015 3:08:00 PM
beautiful flowing write Bob many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/12/2015 12:48:00 PM
- Dear Bob, a beautiful poem for Nettes contest - I wish you good luck ...... and one lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/12/2015 2:49:00 PM
- Congratulations on a wonderful 1st place in the contest - Well deserved !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/7/2015 8:18:00 PM
G'day Robert... yes, I do agree with you. Water has a way of calming us when we need that time - good luck again - Lindsay
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Date: 6/7/2015 6:14:00 PM
Well, your lines flow like the stream. Nice.
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