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Flowing Love

My love for you ~flows~ it flows like ocean ripples a constant tide of continuous current spinning ~Flows~ like a melody of falling raindrops in a puddle of passion My love ~flows~ free as the wind off a river bed serene as an ocean view Lay

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Date: 7/11/2011 3:02:00 PM
Really enjoying this Lay..good discription easy flow rich feel.! oh and soup mail..!
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:49:00 AM
Wow Lay, this is a beauty you have here.. Absolutely dig the flow of this write of yours.. You made me ;-) while reading this one - tc Wilma
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Date: 7/11/2011 9:55:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us Lay. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2011 7:51:00 AM
wow! what a wonderful flow! Thanks Lay.,..p.d.
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