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Flowing Downwards

Glide with me down through blue coral mounds, froth of your wavelets bathes my shoulders with a cloak draping my moistened arms as we glitter like translucent stars; till notes float where cool pleasure ripples-- drenching hungry bodies on the grass like a bend spread in caves of delight rowing with gentle moans of one tide. Some Form Of Crystalline Submitted by Amelie Mara--- 26 Oct 2014

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Date: 11/8/2014 2:43:00 PM
Lovely...with expressive imagery where pleasure ripples and flows seductively. A very worthy winner in Nette's contest...congratulations! // paul
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Date: 11/8/2014 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem Amelia.
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:18:00 AM
Nice imagery, congrats on the win, Amelia
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Date: 11/7/2014 1:46:00 AM
water of sensuality marks this flowing write, amelie...your last line is defining!..thank you for being part of my contest and huge congrats!
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Date: 11/6/2014 11:13:00 PM
Amelie, Wow! Passion flows through every line of this winning piece! Fantastic win and much deserved!
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Date: 11/6/2014 9:49:00 PM
this is a gorgeous and romantic poem. Glad I am getting to see it on the winners' list tonight. Congrats. GREAT imagery.
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Date: 11/6/2014 9:09:00 PM
Wow !!! Simply splendid with a beautiful erotic moment set now in time with each line. Wonderful take on the theme... all I've read so far have been. Congratulations on your win !!
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Date: 11/6/2014 6:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win for this excellent take on a waterfall.
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Date: 11/6/2014 3:20:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/26/2014 4:59:00 PM
simply stunning imagery - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
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