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This picture is very much like the creek that I like to go to which helps to relax me and open my mind and heart for creativity..
Since the rain graced our little creek, Running whooshing liquid fills crevices Of rocks, pebbles then babbles squeak. Racing surging constantly balances Cadences of rhythm causes gurlging. The poetic quality calms relaxes. Lapping kisses caress stones~no pounding. Calming tranquil scene heart rhythm fixes. Ameliorate health; opens wide heart To nature_ and wonder of soothing Sounds~creek's gushing words of art Relaxing mind__accommodating

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Date: 9/30/2011 6:55:00 PM
Think you have nailed it down, water sink swim or drown, pleasant sparkle of the sound, hypnotising without frown, most times...
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Date: 9/24/2011 10:24:00 AM
Water and thoughts are perfectly blended,Sara Sweetly penned for the contest.
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Date: 9/24/2011 9:08:00 AM
moods of water so intricately woven here , sara..i like the whooshing sound! best of luck with huggs, nette
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Date: 9/24/2011 4:15:00 AM
So vivid and full of imagery, almost therapeutic! You perfectly captured the theme of "Flowing Water." Good luck in the contest (and thanks for your comment too).
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Date: 9/24/2011 1:27:00 AM
Nice picture you've painted there, best of luck for the contest, Sara
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Date: 9/23/2011 11:43:00 PM
I like your theme on flowing creek water. It really is a great sound,isn't it?
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Date: 9/23/2011 9:06:00 PM
canyou believe some people have this on tape? john
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Date: 9/23/2011 6:36:00 PM
this is a lovely poem Sara and best of luck in the contest
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Date: 9/23/2011 6:12:00 PM
ah, yes... the relaxed mind... beauty thing. Thanks for the write, Sara. Namaste~N
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