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Flower Song

Oh, where do tender flowers sing? When do we hear flushed petals strum? Soft on the breeze, blooms sweetly hum. Their melodies begin in spring. I walk through meadows delicate. The flowers’ song a symphony; no sound of death’s cacophony. In beauty, earth and sky beget. The season’s sounds, a pleasure heard, each flight of buzzing bumble bee, each butterfly fluttering free, Spring’s lyrics sung without a word. With every flower blooming wild, lovers dance silently beguiled. *For Rick's Flower Song Contest, 2/15/15 Form - enclosed rhyme, ending in a couplet

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Date: 3/31/2015 6:03:00 PM
This is beautiful.....congratulations
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Date: 3/30/2015 6:40:00 AM
Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/30/2015 5:30:00 AM
How wonderful that your beautiful poem took First Place Rhonda. Big Congrats!
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Date: 3/29/2015 8:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend eve
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Date: 3/29/2015 10:16:00 AM
Big congratulations Rhonda...I can see why this one blooms the highest :)
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Date: 3/29/2015 8:42:00 AM
Rhonda, congratulations on your first place win with this beautiful poem, a perfect 7 . . .
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Date: 3/28/2015 9:52:00 PM
way to go, my friend. I just knew it would do wonderfully well.
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Date: 3/28/2015 5:00:00 PM
Congrats on your top placement here, love the envelope rhyme scheme, don't see it used often enough.
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Date: 3/28/2015 3:20:00 PM
congratulations my poetic friend for your well deserved win
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Date: 3/28/2015 1:56:00 PM
Ah, Rhonda, lovely peek at the hope of spring and its promise of the first dance. /Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/28/2015 1:51:00 PM
Beautiful and happy flower song, Rhonda. Congratulations! :) Kim
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Date: 3/28/2015 1:34:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, I missed seeing this before, but now I read your Flower Song and it is so lovely! A heartfelt congratulations to you for your well-deserved First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/28/2015 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Your words seemed to flow effortlessly and the imagery created a feeling of tranquility wrapped in a bouquet of spring flowers. Emile. #7
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Date: 3/28/2015 12:25:00 PM
Many congrats Rhonda!
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Date: 3/28/2015 12:12:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/16/2015 11:14:00 PM
Awesom pen... #7 and best wishes .. nad
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Date: 2/16/2015 8:12:00 AM
Simply beautiful! Tender images. And I love the line "Spring's lyrics sung without a word"
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Date: 2/16/2015 5:09:00 AM
- This is a really beautiful, Rhonda - a 7 from me - I wish you best of luck in contest !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/15/2015 6:21:00 PM
So beautifully written, Rhonda! I'm sure you'll do well in the contest! :)
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Date: 2/15/2015 5:47:00 PM
this is a GEM, Rhonda!!! Gosh, contest challenges are starting to flow now. i still have your theme on my back burner, and now this one and the ABC thing. oh my, how do we keep up. Rick hopefully will love this one and be a bit more generous with his wins in THIS contest, I hope.
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Date: 2/15/2015 5:45:00 PM
a musical masterpiece Rhonda this is absolutely beautiful - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx 7 xxx
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