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FLOWER POWER He broke the rule, shattered it, left the pieces for all to see. The hill rolling, tree climbing, butterfly chasing, game of tag was over and the race for the water fountain was on. He ran with his flock, suddenly breaking sharply to the left, slowing to a two knee landing. He bent low, rolled onto his side, did a little snake dance, then lay motionless. After several minutes he rose, corrected his circuitous cycle, and rejoined the thirsty flock. Intrigued, I investigated the cause/effect relationship of his deviation - A lone dandelion. It had drawn him in, he had studied it, touched it, smelled it, tasted it, spent a few moments getting to know it. He remained unfamiliar with the rule but had gained a familiarity with the dandelion. Perhaps he was on to something. Submitted to Encounters with Flowers – Poetry Contest Sponsor – Anthony Slausen 11/22/2014

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Date: 12/1/2014 10:32:00 PM
this is so cute, and I agree with rhonda. Very creative. Congrats are in order I see!
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John Lawless
Date: 12/3/2014 10:47:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, your comments are always appreciated.
Date: 12/1/2014 9:08:00 AM
Now that's an encounter...very creative, John! Congrats on your wonderful second place win!!
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John Lawless
Date: 12/3/2014 10:46:00 PM
Thank you Rhonda for you support.
Date: 12/1/2014 7:56:00 AM
This is fantastic!!! Dandelions are my favorite flower. I can never resist stopping to marvel at them, and occasionally pluck one to put in my hair.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/3/2014 10:46:00 PM
Thanks Monterey. there is something awe inspiring about a field dotted with a thousand dandelions.
Date: 11/28/2014 7:30:00 PM
Ah another tale of the dandy lion! Did you know the entire plant including the root & flower is edible? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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John Lawless
Date: 11/28/2014 8:11:00 PM
Debbie, that's about the only thing he didn't do to the poor dandelion - eat it.
Date: 11/28/2014 4:37:00 PM
Brilliant write. A fav for me! Congratulations on your superb win!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/28/2014 8:10:00 PM
AH, Maurice, nice to hear from you. Thanks for your support and comments.
Date: 11/28/2014 3:24:00 PM
congratulations on your much deserved win ,I liked this one first time I read it way to go
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John Lawless
Date: 11/28/2014 8:08:00 PM
Thanks for stopping back Robert and thanks for you support.
Date: 11/28/2014 11:51:00 AM
I loved this the first time I Read it and it is even better the second time. Congratulations on a great win.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/28/2014 8:08:00 PM
Thank you Faye, as always.
Date: 11/28/2014 11:48:00 AM
A fascinating poem John. Wonderful descriptions of the sheep as if you studied them to be able to describe their movements so well. I enjoyed reading this very much. Congratulations on your well deserved high win.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/28/2014 8:07:00 PM
Thanks Brenda, the little sheep in the poem were my nieces an nephews, the inquisitive one a four year old nephew. One of many lessons I have been taught by the children.
Date: 11/28/2014 11:20:00 AM
totally unique take on the theme - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 11/28/2014 8:06:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I pulled this from the archives of "life at the park with the kids".
Date: 11/24/2014 9:55:00 AM
deep, observant thought, john... we learn of flowers by spending time with them... superb job!.. huggs
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John Lawless
Date: 11/28/2014 8:05:00 PM
Hey Nette, the inspiration was my then four year old nephew who did the investigation.
Date: 11/23/2014 10:02:00 PM
enjoyed this insightful moment,well versed and a pleasure to read, thanks much.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/28/2014 8:04:00 PM
Thanks Robert appreciate you comment.

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