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Flower of Love

a breaking dawn collects the sun’s first rays my flower daydreams but she seems content a love match is what set the day ablaze wonderful winds of change filled her long days so many fragrant messages, breeze sent a breaking dawn collects the sun’s first rays high noon brings a bee that stops, but he stays he discovered her fragrant and sweet scent a love match is what set the day ablaze he won’t share his treasure; persistence pays carnal pursuits rewarded, time well spent a breaking dawn collects the sun’s first rays a mutual reward grew a love haze the sun drove the night from a love lament a love match is what set the day ablaze the full moon wrapped the pair as one always the flower of love now their true intent a breaking dawn collects the sun’s first rays a love match is what set the day ablaze 9 June 2016 for Villanelle me a Flower contest

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Date: 7/30/2016 11:16:00 AM
Wonderful lament write, James. Love the ending..skat
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Date: 7/1/2016 6:52:00 PM
Nicely written! Congrats.
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Just James
Date: 7/3/2016 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Tom and thanks for the visit.
Date: 7/1/2016 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations James, an effort well deserving honors...
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Date: 7/1/2016 1:49:00 PM
Thanks Charlie...congrats to you too!
Date: 6/9/2016 4:57:00 PM
Lovely James...I enjoyed your use of the flower as a metaphor...good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/10/2016 2:52:00 AM
Thanks Tim

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