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Flower In the Weeds

In a garden which is hopeless Because of weeds Pink cosmos is blooming Like hope Like the stars of cosmic dust They describe my love I'm afraid that you won't admit I'm afraid that you won't feel I'm afraid that my flower blooms In vain It's so hard just to look at you Because I can't look away It's unfair that in front of your eyes My flower fades It was fate that I met you here It was fate that I broke my rules I thought you were a simple boy That just looked good But I was wrong Your soul is pure as lake Your soul is innocent like a child's Take me in your hands I'll never let you down P.S. I tried to write using an inversion, a new stylistic device for me. If you admit any mistakes, let me know, please. Thanks for reading. Lots of love.

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Date: 2/3/2019 2:47:00 PM
Lovely poem Alisa..
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