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Flower In Snow

Brave is the rose caught in November’s thorn While she endures nights of chill and snow, Awaiting gold daylight's warmth to bestow--- And liven her frame…her mouth drooped, forlorn. ------------ Contest of Gregory R Barden: Rithimus Rivisa 8 Taken from the poem ' November's Brave Rose Repost 10/4/2020

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Date: 10/8/2020 9:10:00 AM
Congrats Nette on a lovely write and win!
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Date: 10/8/2020 3:00:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and phrasing, Nette, and a stunning write as always - there were many great entries, so you are in good company! Congratulations on your win, my friend. Blessings!
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Date: 10/5/2020 12:39:00 PM
Hello Nette, no flower lives through the snow. I feel sorry for the rose. enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 10/5/2020 10:28:00 AM
Forlorn? Frozen solid! Chill! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/5/2020 9:20:00 AM
Very descriptive indeed.. .great choice for the contest..
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Date: 10/5/2020 9:09:00 AM
Wonderfully descriptive of the rose forlorn in November, Nette!
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Date: 10/5/2020 8:35:00 AM
The beauty of the rose is her elegant perseverance which is so exquisitely expressed, Nette. Gorgeous imagery and rhymes. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/5/2020 8:32:00 AM
Lovely extract Nette. Hope you are well. I haven't heard from you. Stay well. ~~
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Date: 10/5/2020 8:22:00 AM
Promise...beauty...enduring spirit...love this Nette!
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