Flower Haiku

a small blue flower grows through a crack in sidewalk rose in crystal vase

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James Horn

Date: 7/26/2015 6:12:00 AM

Love it. Now you will have to check out some of mine. James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran and Poet

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2015 9:47:00 AM

barbara, I 've been clicking around on seven poems of yours and seen them all. Gotta hurry because I am leaving soon to go back home. Was here in Kentucky for a week and I am hoping my dog and cat are ok!! Nice seeing your comment to me today. Luv, Andrea

James Horn
Date: 7/26/2015 6:14:00 AM

What were you doing. Watching the Derby. Barbara's poems are always great. Utah must be covered with flowers by now. James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran and Poet

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2015 9:22:00 PM

I agree with Richard. One of my favorites too. Congrats to show it on the winners' list.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 6/25/2015 11:29:00 PM

thank you, I guess it wasn't "modern" enough... lol

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2015 9:06:00 AM

One of my favorites I have read today. Congratulations.

Skat A

Date: 6/25/2015 1:30:00 AM

Barbara... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/19/2015 7:23:00 AM

- Nothing is more beautiful than wildflowers - except one rose in crystal vase, Barbara - // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene Gifford

Date: 6/19/2015 2:23:00 AM

Hi, Barbara, I liked your flower haiku. But sad because now the rose is no longer growing after it is cut. ~~~Darlene

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/19/2015 1:13:00 AM

A beautiful celebration of a flower's birth is found in this lovely haiku Barbara!