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Lay me down into the river in which both are fed Lost of control as you sweep me through your life Where land can leave you (with me) dead Leaves are draped upon areas you love to know The water seeps into our minds and does FLOW... over thoughts that we dared to choke on together FLOW... over fingernails that never scratched beyond the surface of each other FLOW... until we fall from the edge and splash until we drown... forever.

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Date: 2/12/2012 9:34:00 PM
Hi...Mark, whats on your mind.. here... I feel a sad beautiful song... Flowing and rising like a high 10 tide... enjoying..pd
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Date: 5/20/2010 7:19:00 AM
You capture the powerless feeling of losing someone we love so well, Mark. There is little we can do at times like this. Very nicely expressed! Love, Carolyn
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