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Florida Spring

pine trees lash and sway in spring’s gusty williwaw, briefly turbulent sun rays burn reluctant mists into multicolored bow March 2, 2022

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Date: 4/11/2022 4:31:00 PM
What a delightful Tanka, Faye. The dynamic joy of spring moves through every line! Congratulations on your win! All the best!
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Date: 4/8/2022 9:23:00 PM
"sun rays burn reluctant mists" - Wow! Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/8/2022 8:55:00 PM
Gorgeous!
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Date: 3/16/2022 7:00:00 PM
Beautiful poem, and so like Florida!
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Date: 3/6/2022 4:41:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your Tanka. Reads like a good contender for the contest. I am glad that I chose this one to read today. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara
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