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now I'm not that explosion of creative and unsettling ideas knocking on the brain's door even the boxes full of original thoughts do not serve me with their disproportionate profusion now dimmed when yesterday's big rain nearly flooded the street I noticed the drain acting decisively to prevent flooding maybe the same is happening inside the mind an instance of the intellect acting as a brake could be suppressing the flow of words and images I'm looking for the right trigger that releases these gears maybe reality is being heavier than fiction or else this could be the concentration time when the volume of information grows to then be released as a spurt of transcendental poetry

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Date: 6/27/2022 4:20:00 PM
Dear Marco, your creative expression is filled with thoughtful, metaphorical beauty. You portray “the intellect acting as a brake” with intelligent artistry.. a trait I admire. The last line is a grand finale to a striking piece. Love the title too. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Marco Chies
Date: 6/27/2022 6:30:00 PM
Susan, I deeply appreciate your words. I sincerely hope to be worthy of them.

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