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Floating On Ice

Washed up at sea, It’s hard to breathe, It’s hard to think, Mouth filled with salt, I can’t speak, I struggle but remain weak, The sun in my eyes, I survived I’m alive, Air sweeps through my hair, Sand against my bare skin, Gasps for air from within, On my back at last, I choke up a laugh, Finally escaping the past, I belong in the crash, My limbs are limp, My heart is ready, Bring on the everlasting, Bring on my passions, My dreams and fears, All those things I’m afraid to hold dear, I’m here to live, And to love life, Easing my way into a sigh, Cold water rushes past, I’m pulled back to sea, Directionless, Anxious. Free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/5/2010 8:07:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 6/4/2010 2:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Jennica. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/26/2009 9:22:00 AM
If this is not true, it sure sounds it. Either way , a great write. Well done Jennica!-Robert
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