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Floating On Dreams

soothingly and gently I float my boat knows no dryness inside the river glitters dreams they beckon me to get in depth of the river gives me fright they tell me I won't drown

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/27/2016 2:18:00 AM

I wouldn't have it any other way

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/26/2016 9:52:00 AM

Anytime

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/27/2016 1:37:00 AM

Thanks Linda.... Have a great weekend!! ;-) <3

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/21/2016 11:12:00 PM

Yet another wonderful poem n win Teddy.. big congrats!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/26/2016 5:36:00 AM

Thank you so much Dr. Upma!!! *^_^*

Eve Roper

Date: 2/21/2016 9:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your “River of Dreams” win , Teddy! Hugs Eve

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/26/2016 5:35:00 AM

Thanks so much Eve!!! *^_^*

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/21/2016 7:10:00 PM

Congratulations!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/26/2016 5:34:00 AM

Thanks Susan!!! *^_^*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2016 10:28:00 AM

WAY to GO, Teddy. Congrats on your win.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/26/2016 5:34:00 AM

Thanks Andrea!!! *^_^*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 10:14:00 AM

Teddy, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/26/2016 5:33:00 AM

Hi Linda. Thank you so much for your applause, and enjoying my verse!!!! *^_^* <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2016 5:50:00 PM

Nicely done, Teddy. I hope she counts it as three lines. I like how you made them like waves!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/18/2016 1:21:00 AM

I'm crossing my fingers too, aabout my poem's form :-x Thank you for enjoying my work. ^_^ Maybe we can call it "Andrea's wave form", lol. I hadn't noticed before, that I had created waves in words...