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Floating Moon

The cool floating moon Hanging slightly in the sky Impressing many Leaving a white glow around The sky with a peaceful air Russell Sivey

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/21/2012 9:07:00 AM

such a delightful picture of radiant pleasure Russell.. floating Moon is awesome to view and share.. lovely Tanka luv..

Jack Horne

Date: 6/21/2012 7:56:00 AM

beautiful write, my friend - you've captured this perfectly

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2012 9:45:00 PM

What a great image this shows us, Russell. the moon really does look cool hanging and almost seeming to float in the sky.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2012 6:51:00 PM

Beautiful is the moon from time to time when all is right for one to see it..Enjoyed your descriptive work..Thanks for stopping by my Haiku..Sara

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/20/2012 3:47:00 PM

Nice way to describe a summer night moon.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 6/20/2012 3:46:00 PM

Hello Russell, I enjoyed reading this very much. Nice flow and beautiful wording here. Thank you for reading mine and leaving a very nice comment. As Always, Shar