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Floating Marshmallows

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Floating Marshmallows

Yummy wish can touch
They float in the sky high above
Wanting to be eaten.

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  1. Date: 10/27/2009 5:05:00 AM
    Dear Elizabeth, WOW The Title is deceptive to the Haiku Genius A very clever Write Superb LOVE ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 1:36:00 PM
    A new view of the sky, makes me want to fly! I was expecting hot chocolate from the title. LOL Very well done. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 1:17:00 PM
    This made me smile. Great Haiku. :) Love Christie