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Floating a Boat Maverick Free Verse

Every summer I sail sweetly on a still and serene sea; Floating my beautiful boat with my friends and fans, We Cruise carefully on my colorful Cabin Cruiser. Reefing and racing, running and roaming…relaxing, Floating a boat is fun, lovely and lively, I’m never lonely, My boat is on pressure while I’m deep in pleasure; Playing games, partying; with sights and sounds on the sea. Sailing before the wind… I follow the wind’s course, The speed is sometimes slow and sometimes it hastens like a horse, Floating a boat is lively… little luggage, lovely voyage. The breeze and the boat befriend each other… by and by; Every nautical mile, on the Nile, we seldom sing and smile, Floating my beautiful boat is a terrific transport… full of fun.

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Date: 3/18/2011 9:15:00 AM
adeleke, ahhh, how nice writing about this fun boat. This must be really cool to float down the Nile! Congrats.LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/17/2011 7:50:00 AM
Adelek, I would love to join you on such a boat ride. I had a cabin cruiser once too, but had to sell it when the economy spiraled downward. Very much enjoyed this poem. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/17/2011 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations Adeleke on your win in the "Maverick Free Verse" contest sponsored by John Moses Freeman. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/17/2011 4:33:00 AM
Super congrats for this lovely write dear friend.
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Date: 3/17/2011 3:32:00 AM
amazing write that deserves smiles and big CHEERs for the win, adeleke! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/16/2011 9:13:00 PM
Wonderful summer fun.Congratulations Adeleke. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/16/2011 8:49:00 PM
Congrats Adeleke on your fantastic win in the Maverick Free Verse contest luv.. an exciting write and entry .. enjoy your success with luv..
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Date: 3/16/2011 7:32:00 PM
This poem paints quite an alluring scene, congrats on your big win luv ~Virginia
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Date: 3/16/2011 6:29:00 PM
Congratulations onthe 12th place win in the contest of john, Adeleke
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Date: 3/16/2011 6:25:00 PM
So great to see you in the winning circle Adeleke. Congratulations on your worthy poem's success. Agape, Moses
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