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Floating

Depression is my acceptance for rejection And maybe it's cause i'm an adolescent Or maybe it's something deeper Maybe from talking to you through marked cellulars As you staggered to your cell And i got pushed back down to hell And not hell as in the sense it's hot ass hell But it is But when your alone in the crowd When you're starved from what's needed though you never had it you feel as if you need it Like water when your deserted in the desert defeated And your hope is floating between missing and never existed You were my water And i was dehydrated Those were the times i hated Those were the times you were hated Feeling unappreciated I wanted you to need me as much as i needed you because i needed you But you never felt the need to Or you never had the chance to There was never a me and you It turned into a me, you, he, she Never a time for us Always made time for we But we doesn't include just you and me So i never felt the need to No I never felt needed Cause i was never filled with me and you And you were satisfied with we The chance of just us is Floating between missing and never existed

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Date: 4/25/2016 8:31:00 PM
hope to see a new one from you soon, Tupri. skat
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Date: 4/23/2016 9:59:00 AM
Hi Tupri, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/25/2020 11:48:00 PM
Thank you so much ?? I hope your enjoying your self skat
Date: 4/23/2016 1:33:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Tupri. :)
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Date: 4/22/2016 12:52:00 PM
Tupri,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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