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Floating

Floating on my back In tranquil cobalt waters My eyes search the sky As billowing clouds pass by I see familiar faces March 19, 2012 Any ONE New or Older than 2 years old TANKA contest Second Place

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Date: 4/4/2012 2:01:00 PM
A lovely, peaceful write, Rhonda. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/3/2012 10:21:00 PM
RHONDA , Congratulations with your beautiful win, in B E Susan's contest.. Have yourself a good night. :-) , luv~PD
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Date: 4/2/2012 6:20:00 PM
This is elegant. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/2/2012 3:43:00 PM
Just perfect & perfect pic too! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/2/2012 10:10:00 AM
congrats Rhonda on an awesome second plae win for this elegant entry luv.. always special words..
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Date: 4/2/2012 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations Rhonda!!!Well done my friend...big huggsss...reminds me it's time for sailing!!!! love,deb
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Date: 4/2/2012 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/20/2012 4:07:00 AM
Evoking nice imagery ..a quaint lil write, jag
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Date: 3/19/2012 11:12:00 PM
Also a lovely one, Rhonda. But the other is still my favorite.
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Date: 3/19/2012 4:24:00 PM
a captivating scene in words of grandeur Rhonda.. lovely imaginations transpire through words of poetry luv..
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Date: 3/19/2012 12:09:00 PM
Rhonda....it sounds delicious.... wish I was there! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/19/2012 11:34:00 AM
you have taken me to a warm tropical place.. beautiful
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